I am a writer.

I am a writer: (Original version)

I am a writer because I am a dreamer and I do not want to wake up. if you have marvellous dreams, you will share them to the rest of the world.everybody deserves to be pleased with incredible dreams expressed by words, strong ones about love, friendship,

shearing and peace. I am a writer because I want to be one, not famous but unforgettable by years. It is not necessary to write a thick book, sometimes words are lost in long chapters, but it is primordial that every word goes through people, their mind and heart.

Since we are a little a baby, we are unconscious writers. our life is of  plenty of moments that then are memories, fabulous ones! Perhaps we do not write them on a paper but they are written in our mind and make us vulnerable when we remember them.
I am a writer and I wish my readers enjoy my lines, enjoy my dreams and my way of living. They can take my thoughts and follow them without being authoritative. I am trying  to be gentle and to be an example to the whole society. I wish when readers read my stories  they contemplate a wonderful landscape, a green landscape of hope and happiness.

After being reading models and working into groups, I realised that some steps were forgiven by me. Firstly, I did not consider to which ages my written work was (adults or children) and did not do a research due to it was not an informative or investigational writing. According to step number two (Drafting) I think I did it correctly, I wrote paragraphs and sentences even they were not perfect but I did not show it to others and ask for suggestions. In a way I made my writing better, I read it twice (Revising) and rearranged words, I replaced words using the dictionary. About proofreading nobody checked my work, so I am not sure if is it understandable, and if it transmits the idea that I wanted to express. The fifth step was completed absent, I did not read it aloud to a group or sent a copy to a friend, and I had never congratulated myself on the job!  But it is important to say that I illustrated it!  

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I am a writer (Improved version)

I am a writer because I am a dreamer and I do not want to wake up. if you have marvellous dreams, you will share them to the rest of the world.everybody deserves to be pleased with incredible dreams expressed by words, strong ones about love, friendship, sharing and peace. I am a writer because I want to be one, not famous but unforgettable by years. It is not necessary to write a thick book, sometimes words are lost in long chapters, but it is primordial that every word goes through people, their mind and heart.

Since we are a little a baby, we are unconscious writers. our life is of  plenty of moments that then are memories, fabulous ones! Perhaps we do not write them on a paper but they are written in our mind and make us vulnerable when we remember them.
I am a writer and I wish my readers enjoy my lines, enjoy my dreams and my way of living. They can take my thoughts and follow them without being authoritative. I am trying  to be gentle and to be an example to the whole society. I wish when readers read my stories  they contemplate a wonderful landscape, a green landscape of hope and happiness.

I will show readers that everybody can write, but that is not as simple as taking a pen and a sheet of paper, we need dreams, amazing not complaint ideas, neither aggressive  nor competitive words, the world damages to us, harm is a resulting from injustice, death and loneliness, so we need to be distinguishable from the rest. Our handwriting may bright, the pen becomes a magic one, which transmits luminous ideas, and the pages one step forward!
I enjoy writing, I can put into words my feelings, my dreams and all my internal world. It is a kind of gift to the humanity.